Another World 4 reviews

Very good story. You did a lot with the details. It was also very well written. I really enjoyed this story. I hope there is more to this story and that Mark and Danny's story has a better ending.

love it! what u mean by another accident broke you'll up.what kind of accident

This is a hot story people, I hope this man keeps this story going for a while and i like the twist that brought them two together finally!!!

Such a hot, horny story!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! But - long term - please don't split these two guys up - just get rid of Kenneth - kill him off - let's see a future for Danny and Mark - cos the love-making you describe between them sounds just perfect!!

Awesome story thus far. You do a great job of combining storytelling with the jock fantasy. Can't wait for five.

I was really touched by what you wrote.Thank You.I am an older man who was hurt a lot by other guys when I was younger,and I never knew that I could be happy with another guy.I know that now,and I am hopeing,with the Billy Club,to find someone.Thank You for what you wrote.I know,now,that the person allways comes first.

u just have to write the next chapter!!!!!!! i loved it

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