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Author: Brandon Mac

Posted by steve

excellent..very moving

Posted by Will

I have never seen a story so detailed....awesome!

Posted by Ken

Loved it!!

Posted by J Church

Sorry, if you're looking to write a sex story, and maybe you're not I don't know, every chapter should have sex in it. In this case, a short story, one third of the story should be the lead in and the rest should be sex. IMHO...You might want to read "Elements of Arousal. How to write and sell gay men's erotica"

Posted by Chip

I read the story to my lover as we lay on the bed and we both got off. It's a warm and very real story.

Posted by TobiasSF

AND WHERE IS THE HOT FUCKING SEX!!!!!!

Posted by Brandon Mac (The Author)

Sorry Tobias, but the majority liked my story, so I intend to remain on the same structure. If you want a store with nothing but sex, go find one with little to no thought at all in it.

Posted by Oppolo

Don't worry about it Brandon, there are far too many horny young twinks that just wanna get off in this world, they just don't care about emotion. You're right, putting sex in every 4 lines doesn't always result in a good story...

Posted by John

Hey is this really a relation ship your in??? if so its sweet.

Posted by Manolo Chico

Brandon, Variety is the name of the game. In between hard pron you put in such a lovely soft porn story. Lovely!

Posted by HAD

vERRY GOOD

Posted by Brandon (not author :)

I loved this story and I'm glad Im not the only teen out there reading this stuff! Dont change a thing...the emotional part is much more arousing than the sex stuff anyday! This is a great story and I'm looking forward to the second part!

Posted by chris

i love this story so much i wish it could happen to me!!!

Posted by MIKE

I READ THE OTHER REVIEWS AND SEEN MAY LIKED IT BUT SOME WANTED SEX BUT LIKE MANE SAID EVERY STORY WILL NOT HAVE SEX SO KEEP WRITING YOUR STORIES THE WAY YOU LIKE IT TO BE . I LIKE TO STORY JUST BECAUSE IT DID NOT HAVE MUCH SEX I STILL LOVED IT

Posted by MIKE

SEE THATS WHAT A STORY SHOULD BE U TWO DID NOT HAVE SEX UNTIL U BOTH KNOW U BE TOGETHER TEACH MANY OTHERS. DAM HOT STORY BE THE WAY WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by noel

one of the coolest stories here.

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Before I gave my first blowjob, I’d had a few experiences with guys, where I played with one guy’s cock for a while before he stroked me off and another instance where I sucked a guy for just a little bit before he got me off. In both cases the guys seemed more satisfied than I was and I never got the chance to pursue taking another guy’s load. However, one night while riding around with a drinking bud, he mentioned that we should go to the rest area and ‘roll some queers.’...

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