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Cool Fools 9: Heaven reviews

Posted by Vasquez
Good ending. Great series. Its better than that another world crap that you wrote. But now that finals are over and winter break is here it looks like you can finally get some rest. Look forward to your next venture.
Posted by Daniel
Great Story. I hope that in your effort to expose Reed and Adam, that our favorite couple get some time in their story.
Posted by Sebastien
thanks for catching that, i can easily edit it.
Posted by adnan
hell yeah. d the spinoff n make it a really mushy love story i`m a sucker 4 mushy love stories
Posted by Ares
I love this story so much, it took me forever to read cause of work and skool and all that, but i thought about it all the time. I misread some parts so i thought Ethan really was about to die when he disappeared and i thought about it for about 3 days, cause i was afraid to read it. I would hope you write more. thanks
Posted by jimmy
idk. maybe adam nd reed would b good. but im gonna miss sherwood and ethan...
Posted by kamaki
awesome piece of work, I enjoyed reading every word
Posted by Jimmy
WHEN R U GONNA WRITE THE SPINOFF!!!
Posted by matthew oshea
that was great your mind works wonders with a pen bring on adam and reed
Posted by Montana
Soo amazing it was so heart felt and sexy I al.ost didnt wana finish reading
Posted by Religious Demon
I have a suggestion wat if you did the spin of on reed and adam and include a twist involving our very own woody a lil secret tht spices up the whites couzins relationship or maybe puts it to the ultimate test pls giv it a thought
Posted by Devin Brooks
This was a beautiful story Penn. It is absolutely captivating, enchanting , subliminal , and great. I see this as a movie. I loved the plot and character development. You sir are a gifted writer and certainly have talent. Again I loved the story.
Posted by James C Bunnell
I have to say I almost stopped reading this when I seen at the beginning you wrote Ethan Died. I'm so glad I didn't stop. Thank-You for the Wonderful story.
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