Detention 10 reviews

wow..... just..... wow... You are an amazing writer and this story was able to give me goosebumps. I really loved the emotion you brought out between chris and brandon. this is the first story ive read in which it isn't fake, corny crap. i thank you. cant wait till the next chapter.

Everything above times 6

Does this mean that Brandon can PLEASE get together with Jason now???

I felt the same way! I was also thinking about forever. It's a great series.

This really is the best series on the website. This story would be the best way to end the series but dont end them. i love it. you are a great writer

I probably will extend it just a little more

Your series has been really great so far, so why end it? I've heard the excuse of going out on top while the quality is still good, but why not let the audience decide when that happens. lol just a suggestion...that could end up being never. I just have to ask, were you a Buffy fan?

i just want brandon and chris back together. its obvious they want each other and made for each other

Yes I was a Buffy fan Nick, Good noticing

I run into this story by accident, and was hopelessly hooked and deeply touched. The emotions that I've been hided and choked in my real life were overwhelmingly pulled and grinded as I read along. I'd really like Brandon and Chris get back together. There are so many possibilities, but please don't make the whole campus become like a sex camp, that'd destroy the tastes and realness of the characters. Thanks Mike for such a beautiful work! Keep it coming!

If you end this series there will be no point in me coming to this site anymore I completly and honestly live and breathe just so I can see what happens next. Ok not that bad but I am so enteined with this that you ending it will be like cutting off my own arm. I can't do and I don't think that you should end this either. I love the story the plot and line is great and it comes across so well to so many different people. I mean you have girls saying how much they are loving gay erotic fiction. That is so much talent and you absoutly must continue this story. Write a book I shotgun copy 1. If for no other reason to continue this story do it for all of us. Thank you so much

wow.... brandon is like... me

The only story that ever made me cry. Good job. You're an amazing writer!