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Detention 15 - Conclusion (Part 2) reviews

Posted by James
AHh....that was great..lol
Posted by Mike
omg this series is so good i loved every second of reading it im just sad now that its over!!! Im soo glad chris and brandon got back together you are an amazing writer. BEST STORY EVER!!!!
Posted by Jon
Words cannot describe it. Loved the series, followed it all the way through. You have some amazing talent.
Posted by Dylan
I loved this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good job MICHAEL BOOKER!
Posted by paolo marco
all i can say is detention is a great great great series. thanks michael for sharing it with us. you're a great storyteller. hope there's more to come. the way you get so many people hooked with the story even without sex involved just proves you're great talent and congratulations on being the top author this year!
Posted by J
You are a genius. Fuckin LOVED it!!!!
Posted by steven alexander
i just want to say it was beautiful! the series kept me hard all the way through and the ending gave a wishful high school boy hope. i want to say awesome job and thank you!!
Posted by zfdhgbfdbghrfbg
i loved every single part of this story. though i'm sad about it ended... but it ended perfectly.
Posted by Jason
I just love this story! It made me cry! I never thought I could ever read such a good story like this.
Posted by me
this is the third time i read it. never get tired of it.
Posted by Steve
This has been the most moving thing I've read in a very long time. Even the parts with no sex, you had me hooked. I can't say how well done this series was.
Posted by HOT ROD
FABULOUS ,GREAT STORY YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THE SERIES LUKE AND SCOTT NEED TO GET TOGETHER.
Posted by Marcus
OMFG, this made me cry so much after finishing it. But I really wanted to see Jason Coleman, and Billy Anderson fuck. I was really waiting for that to happen, but it never did. You described Jason to be a hot, intelligent perfect guy, but we never got to see just how "perfect" he was. C'mon, add a chapter with those two in it. It would be perfect! Anyways, loved the series, and I've been with it since the beginning, but you also need to update on Secrets. That one is almost as good.
Posted by Perryn
I had to admit this was really good, i was expecting this to be just antoher sex story but it was way more than that. It had depth of a real novel, you should seriously condider making a book if your not making one already. I love the ending and I so wish I had your talent. I would never expect to find such a good story on a site like this!
Posted by Dom
That was such a beautiful story.
Posted by Dani
This was the best rollar coaster ride I've ever been on! I'm a devoted fan! You are an incredible writer! I'm going to read it again!
Posted by alex
Very awesome!
Posted by john
i love ur story it really made me cry although the sex scenes are the one you are trying to sell here. i cant believe you put a great love story behind those things, it really glued me to my pc just to finish all the chapters. making the perfect characters that you will love. reading the story as it goes you will not focus on the sex scenes but keep looking on what will happened to the characters especially the main, you were really great in coming up on a story like these. it also made me realize how lucky some gay couple are and how unfortunate i am to let go of that "perect moment" in my life but i didnt regret it, i just face the consequence, hope to read more of your great stories
Posted by Nike
Awesome
Posted by Madeline
Your writing is so awesome. I really think you should put all this into a book and try to get it published. Fuck try I know you will. Your other stories too. If you don't have enough for one book make a book with a bunch of stories. Every time I finished one section the only thing I thought about was reading the next section. Dude you are an awesome writer. The best I've ever read a book by. Keep 'em coming and try and get out a book.
Posted by Natalie
that was a powerful story with a fantastic ending. the end made me cry and i'm glad everything worked out in the end. Your an amazing writer and hope you carry on!
Posted by Michael
this was the greatest story ever. you are an amazing writter. that was so hot and sexy as hell
Posted by kyle
thats so hott wish i had some one like that
Posted by Savage Geisha
This story was more than just a silly story for a porn site. It touched me. The sex actually had apoint instead of just sex for the hell of it. I read the entire series in one day. I dont know what I waould have done if I would have started to read it when you first started. I probably would have gone into withdrawal waiting on the nex part to the story. Thank you for opening my eyes to new aspects of life. It was a great first time read. I think I will read secrets now.
Posted by BEN
OK let me start off by saying WOW. I read the whole story from beginning to end and it was absolutely amazing. I loved it. I enjoyed it so very much. U should really write some more cuz u are extremely good at it. The characters were awesome and the story line was soooo good. I love how you left it open to at the end. I feel as if I am suppose to finish the story in my mind. Well anyway it was one of the greatest stories I have read.
Posted by Steve
WOW. dude this story was awesome. i loved it. it's amazing that it wasn't just about sex, but actually had a point. please keep up the good work!
Posted by W
Enjoyed it. Was fucking awesome.
Posted by Bookerismygod
OMFG I cant find the words to descibe this story 3 u booker keep writing
Posted by andrew
detention was an amazing series but please! Dont stop now. PLEASE make more parts
Posted by Brandon
this is the most best story I have ever and I really wish that you will make a detention 2.
Posted by david
that was one of the most powerful things iv ever read
Posted by danny
this story made me want it for me and my guy. we are still in the detention lst time stage. LOL. Loved the story so much
Posted by jeffrey
Damn I loved these stories dey r d best !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lik 4 real
Posted by joseph
this was the best story i have ever read it reminds me of my own high school story complete with sex on the campus too
Posted by juan
hey i jus wanted to let u know dat i read all the parts to ur story in one day i was hookedi couldnt get myself away from the computer i realy loved it nd woould love to here about how chris nd b.r doing in the future i would love it if u wrote back to me
Posted by Vayden
That was such a great story.. The classic boy meets boy story. I loved it
Posted by blamulkyCam
Other variant is possible also
Posted by j
great story michael. you should be a writer, lol. thanks for the story.
Posted by JM
mannn, these storys get better and better as I read them. I love you, and them so much I that I have read them over and over again, I fell in love with this story I've cried, laughed, and just read for hours. good job, please write a follow up.
Posted by jet silver
arrrrrggghhhh!!! continue this!!!
Posted by Jeremaiah
Best series of stories I've ever read! Thanks for this M.
Posted by Gary
Michael, I never been on such an emotional rollercoaster ride reading this story. It is amazing the way you have compiled the characters and story line in this series. Shallowness, depth, love, hate. Covered all the emotional aspects of a love/hate relationship that in the end all eyes are opened to the truth. Look forward to reading more of your stories.
Posted by callum
You should turn this into a book and publish it lol i couldnt stop reading this i felt like they were real people :L. omg that is like the best thing ive ever read :L x
Posted by Gus
Better than a movie. I forgot how many times I jo with the hot sex! Awesome! Love them all, thank you.
Posted by noel
thank u. I'm satisfied.
Posted by jeibee
michael.. be mine.. im so in love with y0u.. still cryn.. major major happy..=3
Posted by Larry
Grrrrrrrreat story! Hope it could continue "forever" in the form of episodes or something!
Posted by shawn
Great story. I really enjoyed it. Please keep witting.
Posted by jeff
This story was amazing. it was a mental and emotional roller coaster for me as i read it, just because i could relate to most of it. even though you said that this was a simple love story, it was still fantastic. thanks for not giving up on the series and for finishing it, i couldnt stop reading it and when i was at school or work all i wanted to do was read more of it. im not going to lie, i cried and got angry at fictional characters, but that's what's great about your stories. thanks again.
Posted by janelle
this will always be my favorite story on the internet.i've read it so many times i can recite it.lol keep writing
Posted by Roam
AMAZING!!! You need to make sure you keep a hard copy cuz this story was...no words can discribe it. Kudos!!! If this was an actual book I would have a copy for sure. You actually made me angry and sad and cry. You are a wonderful writer. Sad that the story is over but all great things must come to an end.
Posted by Julian
This was amazing, still crying, im glad it ended the way it did.. Looking forward to more
Posted by zane
this was a very very good story
Posted by c
This was probubly the best thing i have ever read just the emotion and the connection that you build with the characters throughout the series is incredible and it made the story better because it wasnt just sex after sex after sex it was a love story, you have a true talent you should seriously consider a novel or even a movie wonderful wonderful storie
Posted by Rick
And what happened later he went to school and all. Man u must write it at last 1-2 more stories.
Posted by Giffy
I really loved this story,you are really a great author.thanks so very much
Posted by Alfred Mark
This is what writers seek for. A group of loyal, supporting followers that can connect with the story. Michael Booker, you did one heck of a job of appealing to pathos in this story. The tone, the smooth body collisions, the passion, and those infamous detention sentences transcended into the audience's emotions about the story. Making it an authentic piece of art that deserves to be published - if you are willing to work on some ares of yur writting. Amazing job, you'll be counting on my support! Keepin watchful eye for your following story!
Posted by john
Wow. Really good !!!!!!!!!
Posted by Rob
I want a Chris Green!
Posted by Trae
OMG!!! Michal am in high school and im a softmore i really love this story if only highschool would go this way for me but still great story cant wait to read your others!!!!!
Posted by UnusualBoy
it's called Freshman^^^
Posted by Vander
OMFG I HAVEN'T READ ANYTHING THIS GOOD IN A LONG ASS TIME!!! This is a really good ass story. Brandon and Chris are so fcken cute!!!!!!
Posted by Adam
CAN YOU PLEASE MAKE AN EPILOGUE?! I WANNA KNOW IF THEY STAY TOGETHER THROUGH THE REST OF SENIOR YEAR, OR DO THEY STAY TOGETHER "forever" OR WHAT?? PLEASE! CAN YOU PLEASE MAKE AND EPILOGUE!
Posted by anthony
Make it into a gay comic film plz
Posted by DAVID
THIS NEEDS TO BE MADE INTO A MOVIE!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Jase
I read this story years ago, and find myself coming back to re-read it every once in a while. A huge shout out to the author, and a big thanks for creating such a touching piece.
Posted by Toto
Worth reading!! Love it.
Posted by Archer
I loved this entire series so much! Thank you for sharing your story. Can't wait to read your other stuff!
Posted by Random guy
I finished the series. Omg this is the best gay story I have read. Words can't explain how I feel. This is amazing! Hot and emotional at the same time which is something that other stories lack. You are astounding Michael.
Posted by Taylor
Just wanted to say this series was amazing. I read it in three days and most of time staying up till 4am reading. I never read either. I liked it cause it madequate me laugher and cry. Thank you for the novel Micheal.
Posted by Taylor
Also I liked that it mentioned a down couple of miles from where I live.
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Posted by Marcus
I loved this series. Please continue writing it at least till they graduate from high. This was the best series I ever read please continue it.
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