Empty Spaces-Chapter One reviews

That was a lovely first part to a story. thank you. looking forward to your next part already. Well written.

A very good story. Do keep up with it. i would love to read more.

that was a good intro to a possibly very interesting series

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEE THIS STORY CANT WAIT FOR NEXT PART.

Great job Brad! Very realistic story...kinda similar to mine. Very Good!

Good job! Great interesting title! Looking forward to next installment! Hope the sex is good!

Coming out stories are always the hardest to get right the first time. I think in this Chapter you have done an even and well balanced job. You ahve covered the turmoil an individual would go through very nicely. I, for example, did not have any friends to come out to; and, I know many others whom I have met over the years who have never come out to their family or friends because of the fear of rejection. Great job. Keep writing

Great story. Very well written, I enjoyed it very much. I hope you keep witting, I would love to see where this goes