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Author: David Bula

Posted by Koua

Yes! Part 2! Thanks this was an awesome story!

Posted by Alejandro

Gahhhhhh that was amazing!!!!! I love this story!!! Cannot wait for part 3!!!

Posted by Sean

Amazing! Can not WAIT for the next part!!!

Posted by Natalia

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! make part 3 soon. lol im going crazy!!! PLEASE!!? 0.0

Posted by Justin

Thanks u really made my day

Posted by Fall

PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR STORIES YOUR AN AMAZIN AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by Viresh

Hi m dinesh. Its beutiful. 1 of the best story. Lots of love and best wishes. Waiting 4 next and the climax...

Posted by mike

I just wish Alex would have told John sooner on how he felt about him.

Posted by Grady Fallen

It was so great! Can't wait for part 3.

Posted by Donald

Hurry up and wrote part 3!

Posted by Moody Quijada

David, this is so depressing and the ending was unexpected. You just gave the story more background about John and Alex and that's why it's sad that they ended up not together. If, maybe you could write the experiences that Alex and jake had, maybe the ending wouldn't have been too far. GREAT STORY THOUGH.

Posted by Steve

this is great stuff, David! iAM TOTALLLY impressed

Posted by Steve

you have a great feel for the angst people deal with at this age and life situation.

Posted by ryn

John! I like you ALOT!

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