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Football Love: Part 6 reviews

Posted by Erocis
Come on!! Not Jake!! It was better with John as his boyfriend! I hate Jake!
Posted by Jimmy
Must you make me cry all the time! When I learned John was part of the bet, I felt like Alex should go back to Jake. But now I don't know. Maybe he should be with John. Forgive him but don't forget. Love Jake as a friend. If he can't take that then tough.
Posted by Trent Scott
God, now I can't wait for Part 7! I REALLY DO FEEL bad for John.. And I can feel that John is very much in pain as much as Alex had felt.. I really like John.. But, I also like Jake.. Can't the three of them just get along and share Alex? Lol, I hope so.. Please, come up with Part 7 asap. This story is getting somewhere.. And I hope you don't abruptly end it..
Posted by Michael
Not Jake! John made a mistake, he loves Alex more than anything. Please bring them back together, I love both of them!!!
Posted by TaylorS
So amazing. Please don't stop writing.
Posted by UnusualBoy
I'm so happy he's with Jake. Jake doesn't care if they're in public, he will still hold and kiss Alex unlike John. I know John made a mistake but now he has to live with the consequences. I hope Monica makes it out alright, I feel like everyone in the comments forgot about her lol But yeah I'm so TEAMJAKE!!
Posted by Koua
This is amazing!!
Posted by Daniel
Do I smell a reference to another storie? I hope so those aare always nice! I prefer Jake he got into a collage just to see him, and john is a back stabber and people never truly change!
Posted by Tristan
I love this series please make more soon can't wait I think I like make better than John so like dont make him evil or anything please lol thanks
Posted by Miggy
I hope monica goes to hell lol!
Posted by Miggy
and dies in the bank! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!
Posted by dfgdhdsf hsdhdf
But, I think Alex should forgive John.. I mean that's a stupid bet for Alex to cry on.. It's not like John, would get half of Alex's inheritance money if he found out about it.. Come on, Mr. Bula! That's a lame ass excuse for Alex to hold a grudge at John.. EVEN though he trusted him and all that.. Alex should have thought, hey what he did wasn't that bad and he said once he got to know me he liked me.. So yeah, please let them be together.
Posted by Miggy
KILL OFF MONICA! KILL OFF MONICA! KILL OFF MONICA! Life's a cruel world.. Not everyone lives, eventually they'll all die.. Including Monica. Lol!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Part7letsgooo
SO GOOD! God I love John tho common give him a 2nd Chance! YOU GAVE JAKE ONE U HIPICRITICAL BITCH :O
Posted by Dorian
I hope he forgives John but I hope he stays with Jake. I mean, come on, Jake left the military and followed Alex back to :college just for a chance to win him back. He and John should just be friends.
Posted by Eric
team Jake bitches!!!
Posted by h
^ AGREE!
Posted by D
Hurry with part 7!!!!
Posted by jlewis
OMG!! I was rootin for Alex and John. Hopefully he can move past what has happened. This entire series is awesome. Can't wait to read part 7!! Keep up the good work
Posted by Sjc1986
Part 7 soon please!!!!
Posted by Mitch
Team John all the way!!!!
Posted by Amareaux
I seriously want him to be with Jake. I mean, the guy left the military and followed him back to college just for a chance to be with him. I like John but he and Alex are better off as good friends. Idk
Posted by Martin
NOOOO PART 7!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Matt
Team John!!!!! John deserves a second chance!!!!
Posted by bluebaby boy
Awaiting for part 7. please. thanks.
Posted by asdf
MAKE PART SEVEN ALREADY!
Posted by Sam
M waiting for part 7
Posted by FallenAngel
Jake is a really cool character in my opinion. ILOVEU JAKE3
Posted by Jason
jake and john should dump alex and date
Posted by yehd
december 8, 2012 and still no story! HURRY UP!
Posted by Jason
So this is how it feels to be on the other end of spending ages waiting on the next part of a story... This isn't fun. Seriously though I love this story! Team John
Posted by Alex
Omg is it just me or should this be turned into a movie. I have been crying for the last few chapters. I hope he gets back with john i felt a real connetion between those two, i mean everyone makes mistakes now and then. Plz don't kill of Monica she's the only person Alex has right now. My name is Alex too!!
Posted by anonymous
More. More MORE. Please give john a chance to explain hself while alex gets closer to jake.
Posted by bluebaby
we need the next part
Posted by Nacer
part 7! waiting for part 7!
Posted by ryn
Monica?! NOOOOOOOO!!
Posted by cs
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