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Posted by jay
Amazing hurry up with part two :-D
Posted by alejandro
That was so good!!!! Really looking forward to seeing Part 2!! I really want to read it now!!!! The ending left me hooked!
Posted by orion
great , amazing story, cant ardly wait for the next part, i hope you continue soon.
Posted by Dakman
Keep it up this is good shit!!!
Posted by john
When will part 2 cum out?
Posted by Charles
Loved it :D When is part two comming?
Posted by Daniel
That was amazing ^_^ part 2 please xx
Posted by austin
hurry up and write it !! it lol im failing in love with john
Posted by eal
hey david when is part 2 going to come out dont leave us hanging hurry please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! we can't wait
Posted by dds
Are you finishing this???
Posted by J-dog
great story, when is part 2 coming out?
Posted by John
Still looking forward to part two can't wait
Posted by Mitch
Part 2? You reallyneed to update soon!!!!! Your killing use with the anticipation!!!!!!!!
Posted by John
You need to continue this!! You are killing me I want to know what happens
Posted by CARLOS
OMG CAN YOU PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY. TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH, I HATE READING BUT LOVE READING YOUR STORIES! SO CAN YOU PLEASE FINISH THIS ONE..
Posted by Justin
P.S. I don't fuckin care about it grammar just finish it PLEASE
Posted by David Bula
Ok guy i know i havent written for a while some stuff came up in my life that i had to deal with. In good news part 2 is under review but it's taking it's time to become public. I just want to apologize for the shortness of part 2 but there will be more to come. Check "Undead Love" and tell me which one i should continue.
Posted by ryn
What?! Coming soon?! Start writing right now! Just... Ditch everything and start to write!
Posted by Michael Moffatt
Great story so far but the missing punctuation tends to break the reader's flow and sometimes doesn't make sense. I had to continually go back and re-read sentences. Also you grossly overuse the word "just".
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