Hide and Seek reviews

Great first effort. Certainly deserves a sequel.

this is the best story I Read. Please make a sequel.

That was definately one of the hottest stories Ive ever read. I came four times to it. Keep up the good work. You have a talent. Work on your grammar and u got gold.

i love the storie it was ok so when are you ganna make more storie emal me bak soon as you can

def need a sequel..thats some good shit

i love it

cool

YES, a sequal is needed, that was the hottest thing i eva read! i should blow u 4 bieng so good

omfg that was hot i would take ur cock

this is a good story and a hot one yum, I wish I was in their position. . .mmmm whoever made this is the legend and I guess I want to kinda hear from him, if he wants to I guess

totally detailed and great!!!

I loved it. It really needs a sequel. I wish I had friends to pplay hide-n-seek like that!