ONN COME ON GIVE MY SOMETHING TO WORK WITH THE STORY HAD NOTING I LIKE IT BUT NOTING HAPPPEND IF THERE IS ANOTHER ONE MAKE IT BETTER!!!!!
Posted by Dan
err... where's the second part? I think the story was very good but it sort of leaves a blank...
Posted by crystalstar
personally i loved it so far. still waiting for the next part though so hurry up with it. i thought it was great writing and there doesn't have to be sex from the word go.
Posted by mark
can't wait for the second part
Posted by Rigoberto
I loved the first part of this story. It sort of reminds me of what happend to me ten years ago in High school.I can't wait for the second part.
Posted by Robin
What no 2nd part of the story. I've been waiting for the 2nd part of the story for a long time. I'm so can't wait no longer, god.What trhe hell.
Posted by jacob
up yours
Posted by njh
make another 1
Posted by Paulette
looking forward to second part dont make us wait for it long
Posted by John
Excellent. please write more!!
Posted by Josh
Loved the first part! Im dying to read part 2!! where is it??
Posted by Gabriel
I want more MORE. You have to write the second piece. I have to know what happens!
Posted by Momo
OMFG. I love you...`re skills on writing and creating emotions. Definately had me going!
Posted by john
hurry up and make a new one!!!!!!!
Posted by Anonymous
Very nice story! In the daydream, I thought it was real and was like crying! But then I got happy. Hurry and wright the next one!
Posted by ella
oh! I liked this! update soon!
Posted by jason
uhh, does anyoneone know if this guys still alive?!
Posted by jason
oops, haha i mean anyone...lol. love this story too, asked cuz didnt know whether or not u were due to no sequel....
Posted by josh
this story was awsome! i am hooked, what happens next?
Posted by Supa
Man this story is awesum ! it isnt just another sex story ... its full of real life coming out stuff ! gives me lots of emotions cozits the kinda thing tht im facing .... :D
Posted by steve
HURRY THE FUCK UP WITH THE SEQUEL!
Posted by Andy
mmmm this is the best story ever and where's the 2nd part?
Posted by vatson
the story was really nice maybe i should try that smtime with my best frnd
Posted by willy
ok EXCELNT so far hope you keep writeing
Posted by No
I dont wanna repeat everybody elses comments... But a part 2 would be great if it could be here soon
Posted by cookies
that was a good story
Posted by dangtowel
This story is excellent..I hope you write more
Posted by LOne
update please
Posted by Tekkin
What is taking so long????
Posted by johan
when i s chapter 2 cumming??
Posted by david
this story has no fucking in it.. i wanted to see fucking, but otherwise, it was good.
Posted by Zach
Oh m g, so cute!! You have to continue!!
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