I'm not sure what to say other then, Thank You! I love erotic porn, who doesn't? But your story was so moving. Please continue this one.
Posted by GT
well put together - i had those same feelings for a special guy which came to nothing. Keep up the good work,
Posted by dwc
well written...geez seymour, you're so freakin good at this. i believe you should continue this great story.
Posted by CHC
Wow, I'm really impressed with this story. It's absolutely well thought-out and meaningful! Can't wait to read the next installment! Yes, you should definitely continue and keep up the exemplary work! Awesome job.
Posted by robby
this was a really good story. it made me cry and it takes alot to do that.
Posted by B-rice
Liked the Story. Good good.
Posted by chico
Wow! Wow!....Sorry, that all I can come up right now is Wow!
Posted by D
great story you really should keep writing
Posted by [S]ciei
Wow, what a great story! I'm glad it all turned out good. Is this a true story? If so, I'm glad of the happy ending. If not, thanks for it! Although, it could have been finished a little more erotically. All in all, I have to say four stars. I minus half a star for the spelling mistakes and the missing word or two and another half for the quick finish. Excellent though! I was rooting for Jared after I found out that he wasn't a manipulative user like the hints were leading to. I never liked James because he didn't reciprocate for Alex. But oh well. KUDOS!!!! Sincerely, Sorcerer [S]Ciei
Posted by Harry Edwards
This was the best story I ever read, it wasnt all about sex and it kept me gripped. U should write and Publish your own books and if u do and already have some out let me know.
Posted by mly
Excellent, my friend. Excellent.........
Posted by Connor
Absolutely bloody fantastic!!!!!! I couldn't keep my eyes off the screen, it was like reading somebody's life story who I wanted to be so much.. Hehe, keep up the brilliant work!!!! :D
Posted by Rayme Hagen
What an awesome story!! I too was glued to the screen all the time.
Posted by Matthew
That was such a great story I LOVED it!!!
Posted by Tim
Very Great Story! I'm sad that I can't continue reading.
Posted by albsexy
That was HOT and also very DEEP mmmmm well told thanks can't wait for the next part
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