My 18th Birthday reviews

hi dear that a great story i wanna gear more. plz el what happen plz........i can't wait............

i would love to see want happens next

Interesting story but it could use more detail and yes I want to find out what happened.

ohhh i definately want to read another story!!!!!!

yeah i want to see what happens

come on do the sequel i must no what they say

write the sequal that was good but I would like to know what happened with your parents and if things continued or was it a one time thing

Dude you can't just leave it like that.... you have to let me and everyone know what happened next. DId your folks just die?? did you proclaim your love for one another and live happily ever after with collin... suckin and fuckin for the rest of your youthful years.. Do tell.. love, come on share with us all... Thanx baby , so far it was a very hot story. I can't wait to hear the rest..

hi ur too sweet

hot! let me hear more!

ok what happened that was hot as hell I was totaly boned.

I thought this story was extremely racist and homophobic. It was clearly making fun of retarted people

ahh excellent would luv to read more

Sweet story, I spewed alot. I would love to read more from you!

i want to hear what happened after ur parents caught ya

it is a great story and i do hopethat you did write a sequel as i would be interested in finding out how your parents reacted when they found you in bed with you friend collin. hope they weren't too hard on you as it was your first time.

so that was a great story send me the sequel

that was amazing

i would like to know more what happed after your mom and dad were there

I love this story complete it please

so what ur parents did to u ? reply my email please