Nathan's dad and I, Part III reviews

brilliant as always. looking forward to the next part. hope that nathan can join in with them as well maybe. just something that i would like to read

Jeff, excellent follow up chapter there. Chapter 4 there soon?? LOL Keep it up man!

i think incest is kinda hot, i think you should maybe get nathan's dad to bondage nathan, and get nathan to like it eventually as the other guy pleasures his dad? i don't know just a thought

Jeff...The light bondage would be on the hot side for sure. I am thinking keep Nathan out of this story. Remember though, we are only on DAY ONE. You could maybe end this experience with the teen going home and thinking about this for a week or so. The next time they got together would be animal lust for sure. Maybe even have the teen seduce Dad the way HE was seduced in the pool. I don't think you should have the teen fuck Dad though. It will take away from the older guy being the "dominant" one. Maybe have one of Dad's buds join in? Tag team the teen so to speak. But, DEFINITELY keep Nathan out of the story. No place for him in it really. Anyway, your other story was hot too so no matter what you do, I am sure it will be good. I cannot believe I keep responding to your stories. You are seriously the only one I do LOL.

Oh, I forgot to add, PartIV coming soon.

YOU ROCK JEFF! haha

Great story