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One lifes love - The story of Brad and Bryan : Part 3 reviews

Posted by EB
You have me hooked, please keep writing
Posted by Borg
Continue with your story, you are good.
Posted by chris
you are amaying the stories are great and so are the characters i can wait to read what happens next
Posted by Zerotenks
Great...Keep it coming. I don't know how this is going to play out because I remember that in college they were not together but its whatever. I know you going to get to that point.
Posted by Rakesh Kumar
please don't keep waiting Brad, his real love is Bryan and let Bryan feel that he also can't live without Brad. Brad is his Love for what Bryan has been searching for.
Posted by Rick
I can't wait to hear part 4!
Posted by manek
Where's the next part.!
Posted by BookReader
WHERES THE 4th!!!! I NEED IT
Posted by willy
your the best writer in the world i hope this is your profession because if not your seriously wasting a talent ive only read one other story like this and this one topps it by far if you write another one please get in touch
Posted by wow500
Oh my fucking GAWD that was goood!!!! Wow, I mean WOW. Please have a next one. Wow, that was...WOW! I love where this story is going.WOW. Oh by the way did I say WWWWOOOOWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Jared
this is great! keep it going man!
Posted by Josh
OMG!! I've got to know more!! Please email the next story to me PLEEEEEZ!!
Posted by delonte
y did u stop u jst to damn good I guess I gotta wait again but its worth it
Posted by jhune paul
i like the story. I can somehow relate. Keep it coming. Cant wait on whats gonna happen next
Posted by delonte
Dude y u stop wit dez stories I love dez dey keep me cummin bac fo more it been like 7 months n still no new ones watz goin on ur my favorite author but I can have a favorite author if he jst stop.cum wit sum new ones n soon
Posted by Mike
omg MORE. wee need the next chapter! dont leave us hanging. I'm dying here
Posted by brian
guy don't stop now i wanna c what happens then you are an amazing writer please keep going
Posted by tys
PLEASE HURRY UP 3
Posted by Chuck
how about actually writing another part dave? i really wanna know what happens next...
Posted by Cherrie
Awesome set of stories! Please keep going I really want to know the next installment in Bryan and Brads tale!
Posted by Daniel Johnston
I love this story a whole lot. When will the next part come out?
Posted by Daniel
when is the next part coming out?
Posted by Rogue
This actually pretty good. Are you gonna continue with the story? To me, the story was kind of a self-discovery story. Bryan was learning something new about himself. And maybe you can continue with him finally taking responsiblity with what he's doing with Brad and actually has full on sex with him. And he realizes that he has some feelings towards Brad. Just keep up the good work, I really liked this story.
Posted by Craig
man we've waited for long know pls send the next part
Posted by Brandon
PLEASE! CONINUTE IT DUDE!!!! IT'S SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY! I MEAN IT! PLEASE!
Posted by Louie
love it more!!!! i want to read chapter 4 !!! please continue !!!
Posted by Dhonchushbo
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