That was so awesome! And to think other superficial teen bullcrap stories get a high rating... You took me away from reality and emersed me into your fantasy. It was great. You really paid attention to detail and explaining things for the perceptive reader. The notion of 'father and son' was a great addition to the prison context and was quite funny at times. Cheers buddy on your great story telling!!
Posted by Martin
Excellent story, fucking horny
Posted by brooks
fucking hot story man,,,,how true is it? smile
Posted by shawn
amazing story!
Posted by John
Wow,what a masterpiece. I enjoyed that three times, more in the future.
Posted by Ken Murphy
Mark - This story is amazing. I can't think of anything I would have added or subtracted. You should do a story about a college guy, a wrestler, who finds a freshman that made the team. He slowly but relentlessly pursues him in a loving, intense manner. He's wealthy, and bestows gifts, while guiding the confused kid to become his lover.
Posted by Sarah post
More PLEASE
Posted by raytulloh
Your stories super ceed all other stories. 'So full of pure animal lust..and pure excitement. I think we all lust to have our dreams fulilled. You do that with your great human details and pure animalc sex...I wish I had been Jack...but in a real world..Dominated by a big cock fucker ...Dream on thanks again your servant Ray
Posted by Petr-Johan
Secretly, Sike is the father every man wants at a certain age. Doesn't matter your sexual orientation, but to find a man in whom you can place your trust is beyond important. What he's teaching him will only expand and they'll be a double pair of shot callers. When they get out...Some neighborhood will be terrorized then found they're also protected by the man and his man/boy. Jack will grow up and, one day, Sike will let him find out what and where control emanates. Great story, best sort of father and son, two males, two studs, two men right in synch. Hope there's a sequel.
Posted by Tom
I've cum so many times reading this....incredibly powerful stuff
Posted by Dare Jackson
Wonderful story. Great writing. Mostly happy ending. Feel good ending. Read the either series over 3 days. Shot 5 times.
Posted by Ashke
This was a damn good story. I would like a continuation of it because it's too good to leave it lime this. They now love each other and we both know people in love seal it with a kiss. And being in their situation, a kiss would mean more than anything.
Posted by dicklessdaddy
You're a fucking awesome writer. It stretched on a bit and would have loved to see Daddy get total revenge on the cops who molested his son. Otherwise I loved the relationship between two straight men. Thank you.
Posted by Pete
Best erotic fiction ever! I'm looking forward to the rest of the novel.
Posted by zzbubba
Awesome!!!
Posted by Gerrard
Great horny n hot story, please write more like this,I'm a horny bi curious guy looking to get forced fucked by old men in threesome outdoors or in a van or lorry when leaving a bar, followed quietly and never saw them,then a van pillow up and a big guy was jumping out of side door and I get forced into van,then the van speeds of into quite countryside woods,parks up and they rip my clothes off telling me that my girly body is going to get fucked by them in your little pussy mouth,one after another until your face is filled with there cum, and after that my tight virgin cherry ass will be takin turns fucking it while one of us is filming it,mmm yes please
Posted by mark
Loved the story .......wish you had gone one more chapter ...or even a short epilog ..what happened with Phol .........was Sike Jacks real father , reveled later ? Of course leaving it open like this we can make our own ending but would like to know how you would have concluded the story after a couple years when they got released ....but great story !
Posted by Dave
Great beginning!
Posted by Ronald Steele
This is one of the hottest stories I have ever read. You ever continue this please let me know. The getting more punishment and being all he can to make dad happy
Posted by gaywolf
So damn good, love this so much. Thanks for writing. Sike's a hot dad and i really love that you went with "Dad" and not "Daddy". wish others would do the same.