Real fireworks on the 4th of July reviews

I agree, I liked the story. It was cute, short and to the point. Not all stories need to be long and drawn out. And sometimes in real life fuck sessions happen right away. The writer kept my intrest all the way through it. I give it a 9.

that story was definatly hott, i loved it, write more like it id love to read em

A great story that i thought was just long enough. If it had been any longer it wouldnt hav been as good. write another! i giv it a 9