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Soldier's Story: Chapter 7 reviews

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Author: David Bula

Posted by Chris B

I like this one, it adds a twist we or I did not see coming!

Posted by smithy

OMG, i dont beilve that Mark would do that! please write the next one very very soon, x

Posted by John Smith

Don't jump to conclusions! So many things that could be happening other than a relationship. Let's give Mark the benefit of the doubt.

Posted by Joe

This is just amazing. I can't wait for chapter 8 just as I was waiting for 7! Keep it up David!

Posted by Luis

OMG this was just great but why will the next one be the last? dont do that!

Posted by John

Pls pls pls get Adrian and Mark back together, I'm really really looking forward to the last chapter!!! Thx a lot for all ur stories!!!

Posted by Charles Moody

That Last Part Almost Made Me Cry ! Pleasee Finish ! 3 .

Posted by Charles Moody

Pleasee Finish 8 !

Posted by jon

Write the final chapter!!! Sooo good. I love the plot, the setting, the people, the mood. Keep it up!

Posted by Anonymous

Please, hurry up and get on with that final chapter!! I want to know what happens to Adrain and who he ends up with!!!!!!

Posted by David Bula

Just to let you guys know that i have summitted the final chapter. it's under review now and should be up in a couple of days.

Posted by Kay Cee

We've been waiting for months now! What's the delay with the final chapter?

Posted by David Bula

Don't know I submitted the story about a week ago

Posted by Danny

YOU.R.AMAZING!

Posted by Luis

Any updates on the last chapter?

Posted by Daniel

This is amazing! I don't usually read but this story has me too interested! Please upload chapter 8, I'm dieing of anxiousness!!

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