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Soldier's Story: Final Chapter reviews

Posted by eric
Loved it!! You should write vampire fiction please, your so talented!
Posted by Ian
That was so Beautiful! Thank you for writing such an amazing story!
Posted by Sean Anderson
The best story iv read in so long so happy Mark and Adrian got back together. Would love to know what happens next but u did say the end but any way thank you so much for such a great read i love love loved it :D
Posted by Denys
Thanks for this great series...keep writing, mate!!!
Posted by Hilbert
I love all of your story! I kinda surprise that david will pick andrew as his boyfriend,and adrian will come back with mark. This story is so touching. Keep up a great stories! :D
Posted by Cash
Love dis story and all the others u have inspired me 2 look 4 my mark love a happy ending
Posted by Taurus
Great story David but i just wish it didn't end like that with Cory. He's a nice guy and he was gud 2 adrian, he had nothing but love 4 him, He didn't deserve that. I love Mark with so much passion but he's no angel, i just wanna wipe that smile he had on his face when he came in the door with a fist. i just hope Cory and George find love and move on with their lives lol. Anyway, i'm Luking 4ward 2 more of ur stories. Love u Dave XOXOXO
Posted by luis
i loved it i had been waiting for this a lot of time, and i love thinking of who the characters may be...and i always relate mark with spencer reed
Posted by JJ
loved ur series i cried during all of them ,continue writing David
Posted by orion
quite an amazing story , and beautifull
Posted by Dami
Best story I have read in the longest time ever! Most emotion, love, and sex! And it made me cry at the end of every chapter!
Posted by vince
Best story ive read on this site. Its a real story that actually has filling not just a quickie.
Posted by Nicholas
Wow...I'm really moved by this story...I know its a fiction but it seems so real. Too bad Cory acted the way he did...I really wanted Adrian and Cory to work out but I also wanted Adrian and Mark to work out...as long as George and Cory does not work out. Maybe write another chapter? Where can we talk to you? Where does your inspiration come from? You're really talented!!!
Posted by Ralph
David, plsssssssss. Make a continuation of this, their marriage, their married life, if they adopted a son or daughter. Plsssssssssss!!!!!! I want more for mark and Adrian. Continue football love too. Tnx!!!!!!! YOU'RE DEFINITELY THE BEST AUTHOR. BETTER THAN J.K. ROWLING and STEPHENIE MEYER!!!!!!! REALLLYYYY!!!!!!!
Posted by Sachin
Wowooooo..
Posted by taz
horrible story
Posted by horny dude
WORST STORY EV3R !!!
Posted by franky
o.m.g itz d best i hv read so far. Kudos
Posted by Sabastion
I love your stories please right more ,and you should make a book o something.....
Posted by Pate
i super love this story.... wish i find someone who truely love me too.... BIGGEST THUMS UP!!!!
Posted by yur greatest fan, kevin
ive read this story many times already and i must say i wanna read about what happened after, like the wedding. i no this hole story like the back of my hand, its so good
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