Solitary spiter : Part 2

(Part 1 from 1. Fiction.)

3.Discovering cards

John got to Passion at 10.45, which was early for his standards. He left his car in valet parking and went inside. He had gone to Passion once or twice but it never left any kind of impression on him, tonight the place was pretty spectacular. The place was illuminated with beautiful, sexy lighting. And apparently John had gotten just in time to see the party start, because the cool, house music playing on the background suddenly stopped and the lights went off. A ray of light suddenly boomed on at a very attractive woman standing at the front of a small stage, which was carefully set on a place where everybody could see.

Suddenly a beat started, and the woman who was standing perfectly still started to revive. The beat was magnetic and John didn’t recognize it. Suddenly the more beats began and John realized it was a Destination Unknown remix he had never heard before. When the instruments begin playing more sexy women start walking on stage, each move they make perfectly coordinated with the beat of the song. John stood hypnotized by the show, the song got inside John’s skin and the dancers’ moves were absolutely flawless.

When the song ended all the dancers stood perfectly still at the very last beat of the song and then the lights on the stage turned off, while the lights on the rest of the lounge turned on and the party began.

Just when John was about to get his cell from his pocket, a sexy voice said to his ear “Did you like the song?” John turned to see Will smiling and couldn’t help smiling.

“Yeah I loved it! I’ve never heard that remix before”

“That’s good, otherwise I wouldn’t get paid” he smiled.

“YOU made it?” John asked amazed.

“Yeah” Will replied shyly.

“No shit! It’s perfect! I really loved it”

“Thanks” Will chuckled. “Hey I think we should catch up but first we have to dance. I love this song!” and before John could answer Will had taken his hand and was pulling him towards the dance floor. As John stared at Will’s perfect bubble butt he gently squeezed his hand. Will grabbed his hand tighter in return.
The butterflies in John’s chest were on fire.


The people in the dance floor were all screaming with excitement, waiting eagerly for the chorus of the song they all loved. At first John moved shyly while Will danced with his eyes closed. John studied his movements, he was surprisingly graceful. He would assume that a jock type guy would be a lousy dancer, but Will was different. The image of high school Will was erased, Will today was so much better.

Even though John was the model, he felt so much less attractive next to Will. John was a mortal and Will was a God. Finally the chorus came and the people started singing along.

The beat was too tempting, too good for John to be just standing watching. So he started dancing. He could see people turning when he started dancing freely. His moves were sexy and aggressive, perfectly coordinated with the beat of the song. John knew perfectly how and when to move his hips, his shoulders, his arms.

Will had opened his eyes and he was watching John as well. John gave the killer smile everybody in the business loved.

There were more people on the dance floor and Will and John were pushed closer together. John softened his moves as he started dancing with Will.

Will took John by his hips as they swayed together; John could feel Will’s cock against his as they danced to the song. Will smiled and John couldn’t believe how hot he was.

Suddenly the song changed… the beat was softer yet the song was stronger. The vocalist moaned and the crowd screamed. John and Will stared deep inside each other’s eyes, dancing even closer together.

John could feel the warmth of Will against his body. The beat of the song went faster.

Will lowered his hands and grabbed John’s ass. They didn’t break eye contact and John’s butterflies were going insane; his body knew what was coming, he had no control.

The beat went faster.

The vocalist continued moaning. A voice in the song whispered the words ‘Tocame’. Will and John were closer together, their lips were almost touching.

The beat of the song was louder, stronger and faster. The voice whispered again.

Before John could stop himself they were kissing. Will pulled John even closer to him as they passionately kissed. John smiled as Will started sucking John’s bottom lip.


John opened his eyes.

“What’s wrong?” Will asked opening his eyes. John looked around, everybody was still dancing, but there were some people watching the two studs making out. John felt numb and just shook his head in response. He turned around and bolted through the crowd trying to get to the entrance.

Will got to John when he was giving the valet his ticket. “Right away, sir” the guy said before disappearing in search of John’s car.
“John what-“ Will started

“I can’t to this. I’m-“ he didn’t know what to say. Will looked worried. His beautiful dark eyes stared at him, waiting. “I’m with someone, I cant”

Will looked disappointed. “Why are you here then”When he asked that, John felt cold.

The valet then turned up with John’s car. “Sorry” John almost whispered as he walked towards the driver’s seat of the car.
Will stood outside Passion, watching John speed out of sight.

There’s no undoing any moves.

4.Making room

James slept quietly on their bed as John walked quietly in the room. He stared at James through the dark, and even then James looked stunning.

John rested his head against the wall, trying to see every detail of James’ face. He looked so peaceful, so fragile. He thought of everything James had done for him, he was by his side always, giving him nothing but love. “What did I do” John thought closing his eyes.
“It was just a kiss” he said to himself. “It was nothing” he opened his eyes and took off everything but his boxers.
“It was nothing” he thought as he went under the covers.

When John woke up the next morning, he was relieved that James had already left. He wasn’t ready to lie about last night. As he drank his coffee and moved around the house, the guilt grew more and more, so he changed as quickly as he could and sped out the door to get to the agency.

The day seemed to go by slow, and although all his pictures were perfect, John’s mind wasn’t in shoot. He was in Passion, kissing Will, leaving with Will, fucking him. He felt his dick getting hard and quickly pushed the thoughts out of his mind.

“John” said one of the assistants of the agency. “There’s someone outside waiting for you” John thanked her with a smile, grabbed his backpack from a chair and walked towards the door. His heart stopped once he saw who was waiting for him in the hall outside.
“Will” John said surprised. Will stood from the couch he was sitting on and walked towards John with a smile.

They shook hands as John asked him what he was doing there.
“Well, I kind of felt bad bout last night” Will said looking down at his feet as they walked towards the elevator.
“Why do you feel bad? I’m the one who should… I feel like shit actually” John chuckled dryly.
“Well I wanted to see if you wanted to go for some coffee or something. We can be friends right?”
John’s butterflies, which were not fluttering as much in his chest, disappeared and he was suddenly relaxed.
“Sure” John smiled.

As they walked towards a nearby coffee shop , they both laughed after being in an awkward silence since they left the agency.
“Really I’m sorry. I didn’t want to lead you on or anything” John apologized.
“No, it’s cool. How long have you been with this guy?”
“Almost two years”
“Oh I get it now. I had a little crisis like that with my last partner… we were going on 2 years and a half and I almost cheated on him”

From that point on, John and Will laughed and talked without any more awkward silences. John didn’t feel guilty anymore; he really didn’t feel anything except joy. He was having a good time with Will. And as he talked, John wanted to kiss him.

“I used to have a crush on you in High school” Will suddenly admitted.

“No you didn’t” John smiled. “Did you even know you were gay back then? You were fucking every girl in campus”

They laughed and then Will responded “Yeah I kind of knew. I kept trying to be straight but fuck man every time I saw you I just wanted to fuck you”

They laughed again. Nervous laughter.

“I had a crush on you” John admitted.
“No way! Why didn’t you ever talk to me? I thought you hated me or something”
“I don’t know, you were a jock “
“And you were gorgeous. And look at you now!”
John chuckled and realized the sexual tension was rising; and like him, Will kept looking at John’s lips.

Will hadn’t finished opening the door to his apartment when John started kissing him. John took Will’s face in his hands as their tongues swirled around. Will grabbed John by the waist and kicked the door shut. John banged Will against the wall without breaking their kiss.

Will started taking John’s shirt off while John unbuckled Will’s pants. Will pushed John once he had no shirt off and admired him. John gave his killer smile and Will moaned with lust just before kissing John once more while squeezing John’s perfect butt cheeks.
He gently pushed John once more and grabbed his hand, leading him to his bedroom. Once inside he pushed John on the bed.

He smiled as Will started to strip. He wasn’t as lean as John and was more built. He was a God, John thought. His white skin was perfectly smooth, his muscles flexed as he started taking his pants off, all the while he didn’t take his eyes off John.

John felt his dick would explode inside his pants as Will stood in front of him in nothing but his tight boxers. His bulge was as aching as John, and he couldn’t control himself any longer. He moved towards Will and pulled his underwear down, revealing a smooth, beautiful, hard dick.
Will moaned as John started sucking like he’s never sucked before.

The moves are running out and the game is stuck…

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