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Summer Arts Institute : Part 2 reviews

Posted by Bry
pretty good 2nd half U cld have made it A little bit more interesting by doing A few thngs like for one you could have put A little bit more thm fucinto the presentation of when and where they fucked,maybe have them suck each other off almost to the brink of cum A couple times thn have thm fuck and such thngs like tht,make it more exciting somehow,make it A little longer the reasn I say ths is I rd it and it seems U wrote it in A rush,and lst thng not sayng u dnt but take ur time.
Posted by bdd
sweet
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