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When I'm with you: Part 7 reviews

Posted by Alex
GREAT STORY!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE, LOVE THE CHARACTERS!!! :D
Posted by HaHa
I agree with Miggy!!!! thts my favorite cpl in this series!!!! i hope they get bak together, and i hav a feeling there time in the cottage will be rly rly fun, can't w8!
Posted by Aaron
This is by farr the best series I've ever read!! Please please please continue writing!! I 3 your work!
Posted by Miggy
Yabadabadoo! I hope Kai brings TJ and Tyler in the camping trip they're planning.. And some of their friends as well! YAAAAAAAAAAAAY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART! Whenever I have problems at home I just set that aside and read your stories that makes me at ease.
Posted by David Bula
Dude I not ashamed to say that I like your stories even though I am also am author here... Can't wait for the next part
Posted by Miggy
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!! TJ AND TYLER! WOOF WOOF! LOL! TRYNA MAKE A CHANT!
Posted by Marco
You are very talented. I want more story but I don't like that the characters are mentally ill...
Posted by Miles
Yaaaaaay, just when I thought this was gonna become as confusing as Michael Booker's 'secrets' series Kai returned to normality. Great story, keep them coming
Posted by Miggy
LOL! Agree with Miles. Secrets was so confusing for me! IT ACTUALLY MADE MY HEAD HURT! Totally not a big fan with those 'creepy-imma-change-your-face!' genre.
Posted by Kieran Lee
Sorry Miggy, i'm really busy so it probally won't be finished till next week. :\
Posted by matt
i am so in love with this series
Posted by Miggy
But, still Kieran I keep re-reading chapters 1 to 7 and let me tell you I could never get tired of it!
Posted by seth
well I was the first one with you in the first part and you realy make me wanna cry i cant wate to conect you please keep writing you have it
Posted by Miggy
Kieran I hope you also right another story about a effeminate guy and a very manly man! Hehe, just a suggestion.. Me and my boyfriend are exactly like that! :D
Posted by Shawn
Yet again another great addition to your story. You need to keep writing. I think id die if you stopped!
Posted by David
Yayyy!!! Thankyou kieran for starting part 9!!!! I can't wait to read parts 8-9!!
Posted by Miggy
YABADABADOO! YO GO KIERAN LEE! :D:D:D:D:D:D
Posted by Miggy
A millennium had past.. Still, the website haven't brought up the new stories yet!
Posted by Andy
SOOO fucking weird in the early story, certainly NOT gay porn I couldn't take any more, I couldn't read any more.
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