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Posted by Nobodyspecial
That was absolutely incredible! Please give us more!
Posted by cris
O my god!!!!!! Plz make more! Its super good! I luv it!!
Posted by johnny
Hot story...loving it.. kai i think he likes you...
Posted by Alex
totally hot man, please continue this story! I blew such a huge load to it haha
Posted by lover
You definitely need to continue this...i think this has a really hott potential!!!
Posted by Yayaya
Keep this one coming it's good
Posted by jack
beautifully written
Posted by Dustin
Kieran, this story is so fucking hot, I wanna hear more, I want Eddie, and Kia to get into a relationship and have group sex, or threesomes with TJ, Dan and the team.
Posted by sam
GReat story
Posted by erick
please don't let kai embarrass eddie let him say he loves him please i love it don't let him be a shamed
Posted by hewlett
Nice story. Had me hard and shooting a load. Please cont.
Posted by Matthew Green
I really loved your story. I really hope you continue it.
Posted by john smith
awesome story, really loved it ;0
Posted by alexander
I wish i could suck a dick like that big....
Posted by jaaakkee
the beginning of tthis story was totally amazing and orgasmic. o: mm. more! :D
Posted by george
that was one of the best stories i read
Posted by Joe
Loved it. Not to much and got the attitude of the guys right. Next chapter please!
Posted by michael
i love it XD i want more
Posted by Andr
I love this story!!! I'm wondering that can I translate your stories to Chinese and put it on the Asian gay community? I'll state the original place where the stories were from!!! Let me know what you think! Thanks!
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