Hey good story man maybe u shud make them pat love justin more n make tyson fall for someone else on da football team. Keep it going man
Posted by Jiewei
Tyson is a Jerk, find someone else dammit.
Posted by mandy
OMG i loved it you have to write more im dying here. lol I mean it write more!.
Posted by cal
it needs to be longer. its really good but keep it going loads more chapters not just one more.
Posted by Leo
I Love your stories please keep writeing.
Posted by JM
ooo man, these stories are getting so good. when you write the 6th part can you write a 2 part instead of one.
Posted by Mitchell
Loved it write the next chapter soon lol I wanna know what happend now
Posted by Seth
hurry up with the next part! these are fantastic :]
Posted by Seth
Also, don't finish them in the next part, these are too good to end just yet.
Posted by nickolas
I would try to have justin, pat and sam do a threesome. plz try this plot. i love ur writting!
Posted by jeff
where is the continuation
Posted by jose
wow its really good it was worth the long wait!!! i just hope the next one isnt the last!!!! great job
Posted by Craig
omg please go on writing.. i love this
Posted by Michael
Great story I am sad you are going to be ending it as it has a great start
Posted by jeff
where is the next part???
Posted by diego montera
Great saga so far but this ones a little short. Ull hav to make up for it in the next one especially if its going to be your last
Posted by Samuel
K seriously luv wut u did 2 justin u gotta keep writing and writing faster too! ur way 2 talented 2 stop this story short. It wont do the story of these 2 any justice keep writing!
Posted by Gabriel
Dude seriously you need to make this into a book or several books for that matterit could rival the sagas writin by j.k. rowling, j.r.r. tolkin, stephanie meyer, c.j. lewis, anne rice, and steven king. Each of these masterminds had an uncanny ability to capture thier readers with thier works and fill thier imagination with what the plot and characters and settings would look like. Your writing is excellant. Its mind boggling better then the other stories which just concentrate on sex. Keep on writing and dont kill the story just yet! Make i book and ill buy the first one!
Posted by angel torrez
Bro im not even gay and i gotta hand you your props my bff daniel showed me these stories cuz he thought i might like your writing style since i enjoy reading a good story now and then and he was right i do. He keeps bugging me to keep checking the site since he uses my computer to see this stuff so do me a favor and help me by writing faster! please! It kills me since i cant say no to bff or tell him to quite buggin so a little assistence is apreciated. Your fans are waiting so keep writing! P.s. Daniel says he loves your stories and would die if you stopped writing guess ill be having him over more.
Posted by Tom
Holy shit yo the ending is to dye for
Posted by ALex
ohhh hell no... property? like wtf?
Posted by Cece
Hey u stole tht name from queer as folk or thts your real name and im an idiot but u no its just alittle wierd
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